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my favorite color for design home

my favorite color for design home WY255

for example i want to choose something for my home. at first i opt the white for walls then i choose a sign of nature for wall of living room. after that i have to single my home appliance. i have to say i love happy colors so i select a red carpet and orange and cream sofa to match together. i'm interested in big green flowers for the corner of living room. i think it's a good idea if a put a wooden dining table in front of kitchen and a woody chandelier above it. oh, i forgot to talk about the curtain and statue! i like a cream and brown curtain and silver statue too. i feel calm in this home and This is quite a personal taste that i hope you like.

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 forgot to talk about the curtain and statue! Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 hope you like. 

IELTS academic my favorite color for design home

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

135 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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