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The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. rgRN
The providen bar chart gives data about the amount building houses annual in Derby and Nottingham from 2000 to 20009. Overall, Derby had lower trend at the beginning in 2000. While, Nottingham had higher trend in the first year (2000). At the and, the number of houses built in Derby were increased sharply than the improvement building houses in Nottingham. At the beginning, Derby had trend of houses built about 40 buildings, and this trend levelled off to 2001. The trend has increased gradualy until 2003 and levelled off about 130 buildings until 2007. From the year 2007 to 2009, The buildings in this city had an soar nearly 350 houses. In Nottingham, The number begins at 50 houses and was increased by 10 houses in 2001. While, the num
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bar chart gives data about the amount
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building
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houses
annual in Derby and Nottingham from 2000 to 20009.
Overall
, Derby had lower
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trend
at the beginning in 2000.
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While
, Nottingham had higher
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trend
in the
first
year (2000). At the
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and
, the number of
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houses
built in Derby
were increased
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sharply
than the improvement
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building
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houses
in Nottingham.

At the beginning, Derby had
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trend
of
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houses
built about 40
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buildings
, and this
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trend
levelled off to 2001. The
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trend
has increased
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gradualy
until 2003 and levelled off about 130
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buildings
until 2007. From the year 2007 to 2009, The
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buildings
in this city had
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an
soar
nearly
350
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In Nottingham, The number
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begins
at 50
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houses
and
was increased
by 10
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houses
in 2001. While, the
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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