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The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

The bar chart illustrates the time duration on weekly basis consumed by the youngsters of Chester, indulging themselves in different sorts of leisure activities from the year 2002 to 2007. Overall, teenagers spent about 25 hours per week in 2002 while watching television which increased drastically to approximately 38 hours in a week by the year 2007. Initially, in 2002 and 2003, the majority of young population of Chester used to spent their quality time by watching television. However, they consumed around 15 hours per week while watching dvds. Moreover, the trend of spending most of the time watching tv programs in a week continued to rise till 2007. On the other hand, it has been observed that teenager spent about 15 hours per week in doing shopping in the year 2006 and 2007. Furthermore, the young citizens of Chester spent least about amount their time while playing sport and in bowling in all the respective years. To watch television programs was one of major hobby among Chester teenagers from the year 2002 to 2007 and their second favorite leisure activity was going to pubs and disco during 2007.
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duration on weekly basis consumed by the youngsters of Chester, indulging themselves in
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2002 to 2007.
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in 2002 while watching television which increased
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2007.

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while watching dvds.
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continued to rise till 2007.

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in doing shopping in the
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2006 and 2007.
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while playing sport and in bowling in all the respective years.

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television programs was one of major hobby among Chester
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2002 to 2007 and their second favorite leisure activity was going to pubs and disco during 2007.

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

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