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ielts task one pie charts

The pie charts show reasons why people prefer to ride a bicycle to their workplace in comparison to reasons for those choosing to travel by car. Overall, it is noticeable that the majority of those who travel by bicycle do this for health-related purposes and pollution issues. In contrast, most of those driving to work choose to do so because they find it more comfortable. Focusing more on those who prefer to cycle, 30% of the survey respondents express that cycling could make them healthy. The same number is expressed by those who think it can reduce the pollution in the environment. This followed by those doing so because of its advantage on no parking problems and its free charge, with 15% and 13%, respectively. In addition, 12% reason that it is faster to travel by bicycle. Tuning to those driving to work, convenience is chosen by the majority as the main reason, as expressed by 40% of them. However, 21% claim that driving a car will reduce concern toward a long distance to work. The same percentages of people in the survey which are 14% prefer to drive due to the facts that it is faster than cycling and they do not have to carry their stuff to work. Moreover, 11% reason that it is safer to travel by car.
The pie charts
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prefer to ride a bicycle to their workplace
in comparison
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reasons
for those choosing to
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travel
by car.

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, it is noticeable that the majority of those who
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travel
by bicycle do this for health-related purposes and pollution issues.
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, most of those driving to
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work
choose to do
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because
they find it more comfortable.

Focusing more on those who prefer to cycle, 30% of the survey respondents express that cycling could
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make
them healthy. The same number
is expressed
by those who
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think
it can
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reduce
the pollution in the environment. This followed by those doing
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so
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because
of its advantage on no parking problems and its free charge, with 15% and 13%,
respectively
.
In addition
, 12%
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reason
that it is faster to
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travel
by bicycle.

Tuning to those driving to
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work
, convenience
is chosen
by the majority as the main
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reason
, as expressed by 40% of them.
However
, 21% claim that driving a car will
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reduce
concern toward a long distance to
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work
. The same percentages of
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people
in the survey which are 14% prefer to drive due to the facts that it is faster than cycling and they do not
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have to
carry their stuff to
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work
.
Moreover
, 11%
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reason
that it is safer to
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travel
by car.

IELTS academic ielts task one pie charts

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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