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The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.

The table illustrates expected costs of the three environment-related projects in three different world regions for the next five years, with the pie chart showing anticipation of detailed expenditure by the end of the first year. Overall, costs in West Africa and Central America are expected to decrease, whereas it will increase in South-east Asia. According to the pie chart, it is anticipated that most of the capital will be allocated to wages and set-up costs. The estimated cost of the African project in the first year is amounted to 10. 5 million dollars, which is almost half of the projected costs for Central America (20 million) and almost one third of the Asian project (30 million). It is forecast that West Africa will spend significantly less money in the following years, when its figure should fall to 3. 5 million in the fifth year. Central America is set to show similar pattern, and by the end of fifth year, it will have spent 15 million less than in the beginning. However, costings of South-east Asian project are estimated to rise to a massive 50 million dollars by the end of the period. Regarding the pie chart, 50 per cent of projected costs will cover first year’s salaries, and another 30 per cent is expected to be allocated for arrangements. The remaining budget will be redirected for training and office expenses, 10 per cent each.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.

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