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The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years. BoP5
The line graph illustrates the average total of rainfall in Australia over last 40 years, while bar chart gives information about rainfall with monthly totals in the last year Overall, there was a decrease in the statistics of both year. Furthermore the peak of monthly totals and average total were constitute in January about 70 and 80 mm, respectively The monthly totals of rainfall in February was 60mm, while average total made up of about 75mm. In the following month the number of monthly total climbed by 5 to 65 mm, whereas average total dropped by 10mm to 65mm as well as monthly total. Until September this number diminished about 55mm to 10 mm last year, and by 50 mm to 15 mm last 40 years, correspondingly. It can be seen that, in the next 3 months monthly totals enlarged near 30-35mm, at the same time average total of rainfall comprised 60 mm over the last 40 years.
The line graph illustrates the
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in Australia over last 40 years, while bar chart gives information about
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in the last year

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constitute in January about 70 and 80 mm,
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in February was
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made up of about
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. In the following month the number of
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climbed by 5 to 65 mm, whereas
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dropped by
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enlarged near 30
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comprised 60 mm over the last 40 years.

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.

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