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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people within a 15-minute drive service in a specific area in the United Kingdom.

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The bar chart demonstrates the knowledge with respect to people withing 15-minute drive service in a specific region in the United Kingdom. Additionally, the chart, which includes medical, postal, and educational services, compares the human beings living in countryside areas and city. Overall, it can be evidently seen that almost all urban people are within 15-minute drive to all these mentioned services. Firstly, each percentage of people who live in urban are slightly similar with 100%. The proportions of human beings who live in countryside, are differences in every service unlike people who live in city. Primary school in rural areas has the lowest proportion of people with approximately 65% people. Following that, the second one is post office in countryside with almost 100% of people. Secondly, the number of doctors in both areas shows the same proportion with %100 like secondary school in rural and urban areas. There is the highest interval that is about 30% of people between the proportions of primary school.
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withing 15-minute drive service in a specific region in the United Kingdom.
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, the chart, which includes medical, postal, and educational services, compares the human beings living in countryside
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and city.

Overall
, it can be
evidently
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that almost all urban
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are within 15-minute drive to all these mentioned services.

Firstly
, each percentage of
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people
who
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live
in urban are
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similar with 100%. The proportions of human beings who
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live
in countryside, are differences in every service unlike
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people
who
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live
in city. Primary school in rural
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areas
has the lowest
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proportion
of
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people
with approximately 65%
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people
. Following that, the second one is post office in countryside with almost 100% of
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people
.

Secondly
, the number of doctors in both
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shows
the same
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proportion
with %100 like secondary school in rural and urban
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areas
. There is the highest interval
that is
about 30% of
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people
between the proportions of primary school.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people within a 15-minute drive service in a specific area in the United Kingdom.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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