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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. gXn3
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken in the village Ryemouth between the year 1995 and present. Overall, village Ryemouth did not develop in size, location, but there have been significant changes in infrastructure, housing over the period given. In 1995 village was more agrarian, in the south side of the village were a fishing port, fish market and shops, furthermore in the east side of the village were big territory where were located farmland and forest park and just below is the hotel and cafe. Also in north side of the village there were few houses. By our time there are increased places for people, for example in the southside are redeveloped fish markets, shops into restaurants and apartments and fishing ports are demolished at all. Also, in the north side farmland and forest park are converted into golf and tennis places, just below, as in 1995, there is a hotel and a cafe, but a car parking was built near the hotel. To all this, more houses were built on the northern side of the village.
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which have taken in the
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Ryemouth
between the year 1995 and present.

Overall
,
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Ryemouth
did not develop in size, location,
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but
there have been significant
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changes
in infrastructure, housing over the period
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given
.

In 1995
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village
was more agrarian, in the south side of the
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village
were a fishing port, fish market and shops,
furthermore
in the east side of the
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village
were
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big
territory where
were located
farmland and forest park and
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just
below is the hotel and
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cafe
.
Also
in north side of the
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village
there were few
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houses
.

By our time there
are increased
places for
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people
,
for example
in the
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southside
are redeveloped
fish markets, shops into restaurants and apartments and fishing ports
are demolished
at all.
Also
, in the north side farmland and forest park
are converted
into golf and tennis places,
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just
below, as in 1995, there is a hotel and a
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cafe
,
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but
a car parking
was built
near the hotel. To all this, more
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houses
were built
on the northern side of the
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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