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The bar chart below show the net worth of the UK from 2000 to 2010 according to three different sectors.

The bar chart below show the net worth of the UK from 2000 to 2010 according to three different sectors. 25LQk
The specified bar graphs aims at comparing the net worth of the UK during a decade with three distinct fields. Overall, total net worth of UK was similar and highest in 2007 and 2010 while government showed a tiny fraction of whealth, but businesses followed erratic trend. Initially the net worth of households was approximately 4500 billion which remain constant since 2000 to 2003 but in the following years it started grew by nearly half billion every year except 2008 and 2009, in 2007 it reached on almost peak when the net worth was circa 6800 billion.
The specified bar graphs aims at comparing the net
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of the UK during a decade with three distinct fields.
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of UK was similar and highest in 2007 and 2010 while
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businesses followed erratic trend.
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of households was approximately 4500 billion which remain constant since 2000 to 2003
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in the following years it
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half billion every year except 2008 and 2009, in 2007 it reached on almost peak when the net
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was circa 6800 billion.

IELTS academic The bar chart below show the net worth of the UK from 2000 to 2010 according to three different sectors.

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