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What are this advantages and disadvantages of this development of study abroad

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Back in the day when people did a university degree they wanted to study on their country, now they want to study abroad because the have a opportunity, from this statements have some reason of advantage and disadvantages of study abroad From study abroad have many advantage. Firstly they know about the methods when the lecturer teaching college student and maybe the lecturer of other country is smarter and maybe their lecturer understand his student, and from this attitude can changes the methods study of his student, for example the man is smart and he is want to did a university degree and he is have opportunity to Japan and he is receive the opportunity and he knows about methods lecturer teaching in japan, it's different and make him to more diligent in study. Secondly of they want to study abroad, they can indenpendently for example one humans wants to explore the new city when she study abroad in other country and she not affraid to explore it alone because she ia can see a map of this country and is it make she is indenpendently. These are two advantages when the student go study abroadStudy Abroad not only has advantage but study abroad has many disadvantages, firstly is homesick, when the student go study abroad, maybe some of student experience about homesick and it is make the student cannot sleep or crying every night and anything, because they Miss their parents, for example i go to Australian for study abroad and i am not indenpendently and it is make me mis my parents, even more i am introverd cannot acquainted to other people the next reason is expensive, maybe some people live in a family they does not have much money and this reason can make dream about study in other country destroyed, for example one man live in a family that does not have much money, but he ia want to study in other country and is it make about dream of man's destroyed. These are disadvantages of study abroad In conclusion, i believe that of we want study abroad, we must thin Twice of we have opportunity to study abroad because of this advantages and disadvantages
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IELTS academic What are this advantages and disadvantages of this development of study abroad

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