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Number of Indian restaurants in UK

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Bar chart shows us the number of Indian restaurants in England from 1960-2015 for 90 years. This diagram demonstrate to rose of Indian restaurants in British of 1960 untill 2007 after this year we dont have alot of change, approximately are equal in 2008-2015. In 1960 around zero center but, from 2970 we had increased significantly in opening Indian restaurants, about 2000 branch. This gain continue untill 2009 equivalent 9000 center in Uk, certainly the biggest Increasing for many years. Of 2011-2015 they had decreased around 8500, consequently in over time Indian restaurants the most popularity from past and have near 10000 branch in England.
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, about 2000 branch. This gain continue
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the most popularity from past and have near 10000
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