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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. w9KN
The bar graph shows information about various industries' contribution to Brazil’s economy in a percentage over a ten-year period, from 2009 to 2019, In addition with a prediction for 2029. Overall, we can see that there were decreasing trends in the manufacturing and tourism department, whereas an increasing trend was only shown in finance. The Rest of the categories reported fluctuating trends. In 2029, most of the money will be contributed by finance; however, the least successful will be the manufacturing industry. Beginning with real figures, the sectors that showed growth in 2009 and 2019 were finance, fossil fuels and food processing with rises of around 5 percent for the two former and around 20 percent for the latter. However, almost 5 percent decline was recorded by the remaining sectors. Turning next to the projected figures for 2029, only finance is predicted to see a continued growth, again by 5%. Tourism forecasted to remain the same as 2019 level with around 21%, while food processing and oil, coil and gas returns to 2009 levels (11 and 26% respectively) meanwhile, manufacturing sees a further drop in its share, falling by a further 10 percent to around 5 percent.
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information about various industries' contribution to Brazil’s economy in a percentage over a ten-year period, from 2009 to 2019,
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with a prediction for 2029.

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see
that there were decreasing trends in the manufacturing and tourism department, whereas an increasing trend was
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finance
. The Rest of the categories reported fluctuating trends. In 2029, most of the money will
be contributed
by
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finance
;
however
, the least successful will be the manufacturing industry.

Beginning with real figures, the sectors that
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showed
growth in 2009 and 2019 were
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finance
, fossil fuels and food processing with rises of
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around
5
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percent
for the two former and
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around
20
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percent
for the latter.
However
, almost 5
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decline
was recorded
by the remaining sectors.

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next
to the projected figures for 2029,
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finance
is predicted
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see
a continued growth, again by 5%. Tourism forecasted to remain the same as 2019 level with
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around
21%, while food processing and oil, coil and gas returns to 2009 levels (11 and 26%
respectively
) meanwhile, manufacturing
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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