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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. mR91
The line graph illustrates the unemployment rate during the period of 2012. Overall, the percentage between rural areas and urban areas shows a significant difference at the beginning of the year, then the graph shows another rapid movement in the third quarter of the year and ends with a similar ratio. Looking at the graph more closely, the two graphs are showing opposite moving trends throughout the year. The unemployment rate of rural areas was about three times greater than urban areas approximately 6. 5% and 2% respectively. But then, the figure for rural areas was decreasing at 4. 5%, while urban areas increased at 4%. Furthermore, the graph shows another large gap between rural and urban areas in the third quarter of the year. The rural areas tend to rose slightly compared to urban areas at 5. 5%, however, urban areas dipped notably at 2%, which is similar to the starting point. Afterwards, urban areas went up again maintaining a similar number to rural areas at the end of the research period.
The line
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illustrates the unemployment rate during the period of 2012.
Overall
, the percentage between
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rural
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areas
and
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urban
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a significant difference at the beginning of the
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year
, then the
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another rapid movement in the third quarter of the
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year
and ends with a similar ratio.

Looking at the
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more
closely
, the two
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graphs
are showing opposite moving trends throughout the
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year
. The unemployment rate of
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rural
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areas
was about three times greater than
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urban
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areas
approximately 6. 5% and 2%
respectively
.
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But
then, the figure for
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rural
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areas
was decreasing at 4. 5%, while
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urban
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areas
increased at 4%.

Furthermore
, the
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another large gap between
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rural
and
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urban
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areas
in the third quarter of the
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year
. The
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rural
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areas
tend to rose
slightly
compared to
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urban
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areas
at 5. 5%,
however
,
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urban
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areas
dipped
notably
at 2%, which is similar to the starting point. Afterwards,
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urban
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areas
went up again maintaining a similar number to
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rural
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at the
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end
of the research period.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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