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This line graph illustrates the percentages of household income spent on different spheres for a period of 50 years starting from 1965.

This line graph illustrates the percentages of household income spent on different spheres for a period of 50 years starting from 1965. 0elB
This line graph illustrates the percentages of household income spent on different spheres for a period of 50 years starting from 1965. Savings became the largest distribution seen in the table in 1965. Before 1990, there was a small initial downfall. After that, the percentage fell significantly and in 2015, people saved less than 5% of their household income. Accommodation began with the second largest allocation, more than 10%. Similar to savings, the proportion dropped steadily for the first twenty years, but after that, it continued to rise and finally hit the top of more than 15% in 2005. All four segments, including recreation, food, transport, gas and electricity, have seen a small upward rise in household income distribution. Finally, spending on home improvements was stagnant until 1990. The figure, however, started to increase continually and finished at about 2. 5% at the end. In conclusion, 6 out of 7 categories finished at higher level in 2015 than it was in 1965.
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spheres for a period of 50 years starting from 1965. Savings became the largest distribution
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seen
in the table in 1965.
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Before
1990, there was a
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small
initial downfall. After that, the percentage fell
significantly
and in 2015,
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people
saved less than 5% of their household income. Accommodation began with the second largest allocation, more than 10%. Similar to savings, the proportion dropped
steadily
for the
first
twenty years,
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after that, it continued to rise and
finally
hit the top of more than 15% in 2005. All four segments, including recreation, food, transport, gas and electricity, have
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seen
a
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small
upward rise in household income distribution.
Finally
, spending on home improvements was stagnant until 1990. The figure,
however
,
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started
to increase
continually
and finished at about 2. 5% at the
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end
.
In conclusion
, 6 out of 7 categories finished at higher level in 2015 than it was in 1965.
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IELTS academic This line graph illustrates the percentages of household income spent on different spheres for a period of 50 years starting from 1965.

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