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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The graph illustrates the unemployment rate in urban and rural areas of Australia, in the year 2012. Overall, the percentage of unemployed individuals in the urban areas increased throughout the year. Conversely, unemployment in rural areas rapidly decreased in the second quarter, with a slight fluctuation during the next quarter and eventually stabilized until the end of the year. Unemployment in rural areas appear to decline during the year, while it continued to become a problem in the urban areas. In the rural areas, unemployment was at 7% during the start of the Then, a rapid decline of 4. 5% was evident in the second quarter and eventually staying at 5% by the end of the year. On the under hand, urban areas had only 2% rate of unemployment which doubled by the second quarter, but rapidly declined to 2% in the third quarter. The rate slighlty fluctuated but eventually climbed to 5% by the end of the year.
The graph illustrates the
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and
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of Australia, in the
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2012.

Overall
, the percentage of unemployed individuals in the
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urban
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increased throughout the
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.
Conversely
,
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in
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rapidly
decreased in the second
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, with a slight fluctuation during the
next
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and
eventually
stabilized until the
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of the
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.
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Unemployment
in
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rural
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appear to decline during the
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year
, while it continued to become a problem in the
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areas.

In the
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,
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was at 7% during the
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start
of the

Then, a rapid decline of 4. 5% was evident in the second
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and
eventually
staying at 5% by the
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end
of the year.

On the under hand,
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had
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only
2% rate of
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which doubled by the second
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,
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declined to 2% in the third
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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