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The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. g3bD
The chart illustrates how many travellers got injured and the cases of incidents by travelling in different transportations in 2002. Overall, we can see that the number of incidents was relatively higher than the injuries in all categories in which the rates of commuter rail hit a low, while demand response hit a peak. According to injuries, only about 20 million PMT was recorded by Commuter rail; however, light rail accounted almost the same as bus, reaching approximately 75 million PMT and 74 million PMT respectively. Demand response was nearly four times as high as Heavy rail. (250 million PMT and 50 million PMT) The number of people who injured during travelling through Demand Response was highest with slightly above 150 million PMT; as opposed to commuter rail which recorded only 15 million PMT. Heavy rail injured as many as light rail which amounted to around 35 million PMT; in contrast, approximately 60 million PMT was recorded by Bus.
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travellers
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that the number of incidents was
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higher than the injuries in all categories in which the rates of commuter
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hit a low, while demand response hit a peak.

According to injuries,
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about 20
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PMT
was recorded
by Commuter
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rail
;
however
, light
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accounted almost the same as bus, reaching approximately 75
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PMT and 74
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respectively
. Demand response was
nearly
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. (250
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The number of
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who injured during travelling through Demand Response was highest with
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PMT; as opposed to commuter
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which recorded
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15
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PMT. Heavy
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rail
injured as
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as light
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which amounted to around 35
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, approximately 60
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was recorded
by Bus.
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