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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The bar graph points out the distribution of the economy of brazil in five different industries. It contains data from a decade ago until the present plus a forecast of the next 10 years. There are three industries that increased in size from 2009 till 2019, finance, oil, coal and gas with 5% and food processing at the top of the list with a 10% increment. The other two industries, manufacturing and tourism decreased 5% the participation of the economy in comparison with 2009. The forecast remains with the same tendency for some segments such as finance, projecting an increment of 5% being the only with a bright future. Manufacturing will accelerate the tendency as the previous years reducing 10% from 15% toward 5%. Food processing and Oil coal and gas will shift the trend with a decrement from 20% to 10% and 30% to 25% respectively remaining as the same as the 2009. Tourism is predicted that maintain the same position from 2010.
The bar graph points out the distribution of the economy of
brazil
in five
different
industries. It contains data from a decade ago until the present plus a forecast of the
next
10 years.

There are three industries that increased in size from 2009 till 2019, finance, oil, coal and gas with 5% and food processing at the top of the list with a 10% increment. The other two industries, manufacturing and tourism decreased 5% the participation of the economy
in comparison
with 2009.

The forecast remains with the same tendency for
some
segments such as finance, projecting an increment of 5% being the
only
with a bright future. Manufacturing will accelerate the tendency as the previous years reducing 10% from 15% toward 5%.

Food processing and Oil coal and gas will shift the trend with a decrement from 20% to 10% and 30% to 25%
respectively
remaining as the same as the 2009. Tourism
is predicted
that maintain the same position from 2010.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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