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the chart gives information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart gives information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries. qdG5

The graph illustrates how many technology researchers per million people in five countries. From the chart, we can see that Turkey was the only country that followed an upward trend. Meanwhile, Poland's numbers fell through five years, but it remained the highest rank whereas Togo's numbers are always the lowest. In 2003, Turkey had the second-lowest numbers of 47 people per million. However, that number increased gradually over time and reached the peak at 106 in 2007. In contrast, Poland's numbers witnessed a downward trend with 285 people per million in 2003 and fell progressively to 226 people in 2007. Despite this decline, Poland still had the most researchers between 2003 and 2007. Three countries Mexico, Moldova, and Togo experienced fluctuation. Mexico rose marginally from 147 in 2003 to 242 in 2005, then dropped down to 179 in 2006 and grew slightly to 183 in 2007. Moldova started with 103 people per million in 2003 and crashed, reached a low at 89 in 2005, and climbed back to 114 in 2007. Togo kept the lowest place in five years and fluctuated slightly from 18 people per million in 2003 and reached a high at 23 in 2005.

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