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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of urbanized residences in the worlds and in other distinct parts of the globe from 1950 to date and with the presumable predictions by 2030. Overall, it is clear that the index of people living in urban territories of all these provided continents and the world has increased until the date and is expected to continue this progressive pace till 2030. Looking at the details, it is clear that inhabitants of three continents, Europe, Latin America Caribbean and North America, demonstrated the highest indicators, 51%, 42% and 64% respectively in 1950. In addition, the proportion of people living in cities was also at the peak after a 57-year span, 72%, 76% and 79% accordingly, while that of is envisaged to increase to 7% on an average for each of these continents in 2030. With regard to the other places, merely circa 16% of Africans and Asians preferred to live in urban areas, which was about twice less than that of the world. However, the population in urban areas had rose more than by the factor of two before 2007 in both aforementioned continents (37% and 41% respectively), whereas around half of the world population was already lived in urban territories. Likewise, the changes that is planned for the near future indicates that the proportion of urbanized people will have risen to more than 50% in both above-mentioned parts by 2030, and roughly 60% of all the world inhabitants is going to live in urban areas.
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and in other distinct parts of the globe from 1950 to date and with the presumable predictions by 2030.

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, it is
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that the index of
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living in
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territories of all these provided
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continents
and the
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world
has increased until the date and is
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to continue this progressive pace till 2030.

Looking at the
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, it is
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that inhabitants of three
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continents
, Europe, Latin America Caribbean and North America, demonstrated the highest indicators, 51%, 42% and 64%
respectively
in 1950.
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, the proportion of
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people
living in cities was
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at the peak after a 57-year span, 72%, 76% and 79%
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, while that of
is envisaged
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continents
in 2030.

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in
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urban
areas, which was about twice less than that of the
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world
.
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, the population in
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areas had
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more than by the factor of two
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2007 in both aforementioned
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continents
(37% and 41%
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), whereas around half of the
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world
population was already
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lived
in
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for the near future indicates that the proportion of urbanized
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people
will have risen to more than 50% in both above-mentioned parts by 2030, and roughly 60% of all the
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inhabitants is going to
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

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