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The bar chart and table compare how much time male and female spend on various household activies everyday as well as recreation in the year 2008 in Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart and table compare how much time male and female spend on various household activies everyday as well as recreation in the year 2008 in Britain. OlP5j
The graph and form show the amount of time that men and women spend on copious daily housework and entertainment activities in 2008 in UK. As for pastimes, both of them are fond of watching videos most and females prefer shopping while males prefer doing sports. When it comes to household activities, women tend to do cleaning works more and men always do repair works. In the bar chart, we can see females and males both spend 2 hours a day on videos and TV, which is the majority of their recreation activities. Females are addicted in shopping for about 50 minutes on average a day while it's 10 minutes for males. And men love to exercise for about 45 minutes per day while women only spend 15 minutes. The table illustrates that females spend about 100 minutes on cleaning and cooking works while that's 60 minutes less for males. However, men do more hard work on fixing and repairing, where they spend half an hour more than women.
The graph and form
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the amount of time that
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men
and
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spend
on copious daily housework and entertainment activities in 2008 in UK.

As for pastimes, both of them are fond of watching videos most and
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females
prefer shopping while
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males
prefer doing sports. When it
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to household activities,
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women
tend to do cleaning works more and
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always do repair works.

In the bar chart, we can
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and
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both
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2 hours a day on videos and TV, which is the majority of their recreation activities.
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Females
are addicted
in shopping for about 50 minutes on average a day while it's 10 minutes for
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males
. And
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men
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to exercise for about 45 minutes per day while
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women
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15 minutes.

The table illustrates that
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females
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about 100 minutes on cleaning and cooking works while that's 60 minutes less for
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males
.
However
,
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do more
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work on fixing and repairing, where they
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half an hour more than
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women
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart and table compare how much time male and female spend on various household activies everyday as well as recreation in the year 2008 in Britain.

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