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The bar chart above compaires Asia, Europe, and rest of the world in terms of total mamufacturing production from 1840 to 2000

The bar chart above compaires Asia, Europe, and rest of the world in terms of total mamufacturing production from 1840 to 2000 30M7b
The bar chart above compaires Asia, Europe, and rest of the world in terms of total mamufacturing production from 1840 to 2000Overall, it is evident that in the start and at the end Asia took up most part in production, while europe is the most productive region in the middle years. In 1840, about 50% of the world’s total manufactures were from Asia, making Asia the most productive region. Then, in the later years, the rate went on rapid decrease (-30%) from 1840 to 1920 and rapid increase (25%) from 1920 to 2000, which at the end approximatly 45% of the production was from asia. In contrast, the production made from the europe was 40%. However, as the time goes by the production in Europe increased to 45% surpassing asia (30%), it keep increased until 1920 reaching it peak at 50%. Nevertheless it went on constant decline since 1920, which at the end up at abount 38%. The manufacture products from rest of the world has increased from 10% 1840 to approximatly 38% 1960, reaching it highest point then it went down again to 32% at the year 2000.
The bar chart above
compaires
Asia, Europe, and rest of the world in terms of total
mamufacturing
production
from 1840 to 2000Overall, it is evident that in the
start
and at the
end
Asia took up most part in
production
, while
europe
is the most productive region in the middle years.

In 1840, about 50% of the world’s total manufactures were from Asia, making Asia the most productive region. Then, in the later years, the rate went on rapid decrease (-30%) from 1840 to 1920 and rapid increase (25%) from 1920 to 2000, which at the
end
approximatly
45% of the
production
was from
asia
.

In contrast
, the
production
made from the
europe
was 40%.
However
, as the time goes by the
production
in Europe increased to 45% surpassing
asia
(30%), it
keep
increased until 1920 reaching it peak at 50%.
Nevertheless
it went on constant decline since 1920, which at the
end
up at
abount
38%.

The manufacture products from rest of the world has increased from 10% 1840 to
approximatly
38% 1960, reaching it
highest
point then it went down again to 32% at the year 2000.
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IELTS academic The bar chart above compaires Asia, Europe, and rest of the world in terms of total mamufacturing production from 1840 to 2000

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