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Person who you impress in high school

Person who you impress in high school B7YQ6
He was the first individual to make an impression on me while I was in high school. I just knew a little about him because we didn't communicate. He and I didn't exchange many words. It's difficult to comprehend that I occasionally caught his gaze by coincidence, and we were both ashamed. We gradually introduced a close buddy. Every time I go to class, I keep crashing into his eye. I sat next to him at the table, and every time I looked up at the board, I noticed him staring in my direction. I also believe that was most likely a coincidence, so I didn't give it much consideration. When he got home from school, he texted me repeatedly. The essential inquiries are: "How are you today? " "Are you tired? " and "Did you have a good day? " Eight months later, he admitted his emotions for me and became my boyfriend. Because I tease him with other females, I don't think this is feasible. He developed a crush on me for two years. He is always watching out for me, pampering me, and making me feel protected. He understands listening, soothing, and caring for me because I am a clumsy and naughty youngster. When he's upset, he's cute. We made time to care for one another despite the fact that we were both busy with our academics and separated after high school. That is why I adore him.
He was the
first
individual to
make
an impression on me while I was in high school. I
just
knew
a
little
about him
because
we didn't communicate. He and I didn't exchange
many
words. It's difficult to comprehend that I
occasionally
caught his gaze by coincidence, and we were both ashamed. We
gradually
introduced a close buddy. Every time I go to
class
, I
keep
crashing into his eye. I sat
next
to him at the table, and every time I looked up at the board, I noticed him staring in my direction. I
also
believe that was most likely a coincidence,
so
I didn't give it much consideration. When he
got
home from school, he texted me
repeatedly
. The essential inquiries are:
"
How are you
today
?
"
"
Are you tired?
"
and
"
Did you have a
good
day?
"


Eight months later, he admitted his emotions for me and became my boyfriend.
Because
I tease him with other females, I don't
think
this is feasible. He developed a crush on me for two years. He is always watching out for me, pampering me, and making me feel protected.
He
understands listening, soothing, and caring for me
because
I am a clumsy and naughty youngster. When he's upset, he's cute. We made time to care for one another despite the fact that we were both busy with our academics and separated after high school.
That is
why I adore him.
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