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the average time and money spent at different type of restourants.

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The table shows comparison of the avarage time and money spent at diferent type of restourants, It will discuss into two sections, which are time then next is money that people used to spent in every each type of restourant. First passage is about time, as we can see the avarage time that people spent in restourant always increased according to luxury type of restourant, the fastest time owned by fast-food restourant, and the longest owned by sit-down restourant. And other thing is level of increase is measured significant. Futuremore is about money, overall the expense for every type of restourant is increases depending on luxury type of restourant, people spent highest money at sit-down restourant and the cheapest at fast-food restourant. In conclusion, we able see that people spent less money and time for the fast-food restourant type, and people would like to spent more money and time for sit-down restourant.
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IELTS academic the average time and money spent at different type of restourants.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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