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How to collect water by the method of swing basket and rope and bucket

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The diagrams show how to collect water by the method of swing basket and rope and bucket. As we see, now there are two methods of collecting water. One of them is swing basket. We use this method to collect water from one or two meter depth. Basically, it is used for irrigating fields by farmers. Swing basket which is made of bamboo or leather and bind with ropes and it is catched from two sides by two people and poured water into the irrigation chanels with their help. Rope and bucket's method is more difficult than the swing basket. The reason why, it taken from fifty metres deep with bucket who's is binded ropes that is pulled by rollers and pulley. That helps to bulls take out the water to irrigation chanels in slope. Thus, we can show these two method of irrigation purposes are very difficult and different from each other
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there are two
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methods
of collecting
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water
. One of them is
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swing
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basket
. We
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method
to collect
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from one or two meter depth.

Basically
, it is
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for irrigating fields by farmers.
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Swing
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basket
which
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of bamboo or leather and bind with
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ropes
and it is
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catched
from two sides by two
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people
and poured
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water
into the irrigation
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chanels
with their
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help
.
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and bucket's
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method
is more difficult than the
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swing
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basket
. The reason why, it
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taken
from fifty
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metres
deep with bucket
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binded
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ropes
that
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chanels
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, we can
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IELTS academic How to collect water by the method of swing basket and rope and bucket

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4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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