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Kilometres travelled and the distribution of vehicle types in Britain from the year 1990 to 2010

Kilometres travelled and the distribution of vehicle types in Britain from the year 1990 to 2010 7a0w6
The provided line graph describe different type of vehicle through people travelled number of kilometres in average month in Britain from the year 1990 and 2010. As looking more closely to graph is, that in 1990 there were travelling highly for transport at 6100 kms and after next five years it at peaks continuing for upto 2000 kms and then it goes down in last year 2010 on six thousand km. moreover, if consider next purpose of travelling was commuting were slightly lower than delivery but much more than personal travel. It begins at 3100 kms and few rise even after that it goes falling more in 2010. Moving to further details, the personal travel were lowest than all other travelling purpose and it reflect that most of people traveled fewer km for personal preference only at 1800 kms and only raise at two hundred km for continuing 10 years and it show few raise in 2010 at 2200kms. Overall, the transport and delivery purpose were highest among all of them and personal travel were lowest purpose for travelling.
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1990 and 2010.

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and then it goes down in last
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2010 on six thousand km.
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was commuting were
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travel. It
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kms
and few rise even after that it goes falling more in 2010.

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traveled fewer km for
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raise at two hundred km for continuing 10 years and it
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few raise in 2010 at 2200kms.

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, the transport and delivery
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were highest among all of them and
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IELTS academic Kilometres travelled and the distribution of vehicle types in Britain from the year 1990 to 2010

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