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The given table illustrates statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the global.

The given table illustrates statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the global. gWKqD
The given table illustrates statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the global. Overall, london metro system is both the oldest when completed in 1863 as well as the longest approximately 1100 km of lenghth. Kyoto system saw the shortest of length and carrying capacity per year, comparing to other metro systems, with 11 km of length and 11 millions passengers annually. Look in table for more details, los angeles and kyoto are the two newest system but their carrying capacity and total length are modest to compare with the old systems. While paris metro system is the second oldest when complete contructed in 1890, their carrying capicity the second biggest with 854 million passengers per year. At can be seen in the table, although tokyo metro system is not the newest or the biggest but their capacity over expectation with 144 million passengers annually. finally, in this year, the washington dc metro system are 100 years old already, and the total length are 114km and can able to tranfer 70 millions people per year.
The
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given
table illustrates statistics on several major
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metro
(MRT)
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systems
around the global.

Overall
,
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london
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metro
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system
is both the oldest when completed in 1863
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as well as
the longest approximately 1100 km of
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lenghth
. Kyoto
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system
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saw
the shortest of
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length
and carrying capacity per
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year
, comparing to other
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metro
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systems
, with 11 km of
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length
and 11
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millions
passengers
annually
.

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details
,
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and
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kyoto
are the two newest
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system
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but
their carrying capacity and total
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length
are modest to compare with the
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old
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systems
. While
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paris
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metro
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system
is the second oldest when complete
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contructed
in 1890, their carrying
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capicity
the second biggest with 854
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million
passengers per year.

At can be
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seen
in the table, although
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tokyo
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metro
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system
is not the newest or the biggest
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but
their capacity over expectation with 144
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million
passengers
annually
.
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finally
, in this
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year
, the
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washington
dc
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metro
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system
are 100 years
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old
already, and the total
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length
are
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114km
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can able to
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tranfer
70
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millions
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IELTS academic The given table illustrates statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the global.

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