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The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. o5GYg
The graph illustrates the number of international students 5 different countries: Colombia, Indonesia, Nepal, Vietnam and India, in thousands who applied for De Salle University during 40 years, starting in 1980. Overall, it is clear that this university was the most favorite for Indian people whereas the students from Colombia did not consider it as a best one. To begin with, Indian students make up a high point in the whole graph by the number of enrolments with around 7500 for University of Riverview and 6000 for Smithtown. In the next stage, between 4000 and 5000 of students from Nepal cover while approximately 3500 of Vietnamese students prefer to choose Earlwood and Riverview, reporting the lowest rate for Smithtown. Indonesia and also Colombia represent downstream places regularly around 1000 and among them the students from Colombia who want to apply for Smithtown University are too less and even they are under 500.
The graph illustrates the number of international
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Salle
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University
during 40 years, starting in 1980.
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clear
that this
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was the most favorite for Indian
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people
whereas the
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students
from Colombia did not consider it as
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a
best one.

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with, Indian
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students
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up a high point in the whole graph by the number of
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enrolments
with around 7500 for
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University
of Riverview and 6000 for
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Smithtown
. In the
next
stage, between 4000 and 5000 of
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students
from Nepal cover while approximately 3500 of Vietnamese
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prefer to choose
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Earlwood
and Riverview, reporting the lowest rate for
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Smithtown
.

Indonesia and
also
Colombia represent downstream places
regularly
around 1000 and among them the
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students
from Colombia who want to apply for
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Smithtown
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University
are too less and even they are under 500.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

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