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The amount of each type of food that people eat

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The par chart displays clearly the amount of percentage which is obviously have three types. However, it has various kind such as sodium, saturateal aft and added sugar. Overall, as could be seen properly sodium takes 4 percent as well. Thus, it could be noticed flawlessly the highest amount is for dinner which approximately 43%. Therefore, the lowest percentage similarly is for snacks and breakfast which is roughly 20%.
The par chart displays
clearly
the amount of percentage which is
obviously
Consider using a past participle here: "had".
have
three types.
However
, it has various kind such as sodium,
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saturateal
aft and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
sugar.
Overall
, as could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
properly
sodium takes 4 percent
as well
.
Thus
, it could
be noticed
flawlessly
the highest amount is for dinner which approximately 43%.
Therefore
, the lowest percentage
similarly
is for snacks and breakfast which is roughly 20%.
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IELTS academic The amount of each type of food that people eat

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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