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The amount of each type of food that people eat

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 sugar. Overall
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 sodium takes 4 percent as well
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 the highest amount is for dinner which approximately 43%. Therefore
, the lowest percentage similarly
 is for snacks and breakfast which is roughly 20%. 

IELTS academic The amount of each type of food that people eat

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

69 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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