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driving to work in houston, texas

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The table shows the information about various means of transport which people use to go to work in Houston, Texas. And the other one, the bar chart, shows the amount of CO2 emissions that each form of vehicles discharged.  In the table, cars with 1 person are the most popular means of transport with 48% while cycling or walking is the least ones, just 4%. Public transport (buses and trains) are the second most common means of transport with 37% of commuters use. However, the average age of traveler are quiet different from these index, people who choose public transport have the highest average which is 47%, the second one who go to work by car with more than 1 person is 44%, then car with 1 person is 43% and just 39% of people prefer cycling or walking.  In the bar chart, cyclists and walkers are more friendly with the environment because no CO2 emissions are discharged from this transport. While people who driving alone have the highest CO2 emissions about 0, 3 kilograms per person per kilometer. Then, people who go to work together by car cause less pollution, which nearly 0, 07.  And people that choose bus or train cause the least one, just about 0, 01.  Overall, the most common means of transport are cars with one person but the friendliest with environment is cycling or walking.
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IELTS academic driving to work in houston, texas

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