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the action of making cherry jam

the action of making cherry jam YkrAm

The diagrams display the action of producing cherry jam. There are nine main stages in the process, to start with collecting and transporting cherry to the processing plant and end with labeling jam in the factory First, a sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken so that cherries fall down the ground. All of the cherries which are collected are sent by the trucks to the processing plant. After that, the leaves and the stems of cherries are removed, then the cherries are sprayed with water to wash when they are moving on a ramp. Next, put the cherries on a conveyor to take out the seed. Then, all of the cherries are being cooked in the big pot and add some extra ingredients too. After the quality is checked by the experts, the jam is filled into the jars. Finally, all of the goods are labled.

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start
 with collecting and transporting cherry to the processing plant and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 with labeling jam in the factory

First
, a sheet is spread
 on the ground and the tree is shaken
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so
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 fall down the ground. Consider using "all the".All the
All of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 which are collected
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 by the trucks to the processing plant. After that, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and the stems of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are removed
, then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are sprayed
 with water to wash when they are moving on a ramp. Next
, put the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 on a conveyor to take out the seed. Then, Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
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cherries
 are being cooked
 in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 pot and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
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some
 extra ingredients too. After the quality is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 by the experts, the jam is filled
 into the jars. Finally
, Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
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goods
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labled
. 