Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The above indicates average student costs during the school year. Interpret the data explaining any abnormalities with possible reasons.

The above indicates average student costs during the school year. Interpret the data explaining any abnormalities with possible reasons. KWO39
The above graph shows average costs for university students over a four year period. The items measured are food, housing, and books. Beginning with books, it can be seen that the expenses for each of the four years are nearly the same. This can be explained in that a student usually takes a similar number of classes each semester and the book expense would remain nearly steady. Food, also, is nearly equal with a slight increase in the second year and then a decline in years three and four. Perhaps this reflects students who move off campus in their second year and spend more on food than they did while living on campus. Housing costs show a large increase in the third year with a return to slightly lower than first and second year totals for the fourth year. An explanation could be that there was a large increase in the number of students attending the university, thereby causing a temporary price rise in the market for housing.
The above graph
shows
average costs for university
students
over a four
year
period. The items measured are food, housing, and books. Beginning with books, it can be
seen
that the expenses for each of the four years are
nearly
the same. This can be
explained
in that a
student
usually
takes a similar number of classes each semester and the book expense would remain
nearly
steady. Food,
also
, is
nearly
equal with a slight increase in the second
year
and then a decline in years three and four. Perhaps this reflects
students
who
move
off campus in their second
year
and spend more on food than they did while living on campus. Housing costs
show
a large increase in the third
year
with a return to
slightly
lower than
first
and second
year
totals for the fourth
year
. An explanation could be that there was a large increase in the number of
students
attending the university, thereby causing a temporary price rise in the market for housing.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The above indicates average student costs during the school year. Interpret the data explaining any abnormalities with possible reasons.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: