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The above diagrams provide information about the changes made in the network of roads connected with the City Hospital. The modifications occurred between 2007 and 2010.

The above diagrams provide information about the changes made in the network of roads connected with the City Hospital. The modifications occurred between 2007 and 2010. KGEa6
The above diagrams provide information about the changes made in the network of roads connected with the City Hospital. The modifications occurred between 2007 and 2010. To start with, in the plans it is evident that two roundabouts were added on the north and on the south side of Hospital Road. They are located exactly at the junction with Ring Road and at the intersection with City Road. In addition to the roundabouts, the common car park for staff and public, once rectangular and situated on the left side of Hospital Road, was reduced in size due to the addition of the roundabouts. A separate car park, reserved for staff, was built on the east side of City Hospital, whereas, a new car park, adjacent to the right branch of the ring, was provided for public use. In terms of public means of transport, while in 2007 a number of bus stops were present along Hospital Road, by 2010 all buses had started arriving at and leaving from the newly-built bus station in front of the staff car park. On the whole, the maps indicate that the main modifications in the area concern the access to the zone where the hospital is located. Whilst the circuit of roads on the western and northern side of the Hospital remained unchanged after 2007, a new car park was added and the T-junction with Hospital Road was modified.
The above diagrams provide information about the
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changes
made in the network of
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roads
connected with the City
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Hospital
. The modifications occurred between 2007 and 2010.

To
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start
with, in the plans it is evident that two roundabouts were
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added
on the north and on the south side of
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Hospital
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Road
. They
are located
exactly at the junction with Ring
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Road
and at the intersection with City Road.

In addition
to the roundabouts, the common
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car
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park
for staff and public, once rectangular and situated on the
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left
side of
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Hospital
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Road
, was
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reduced
in size due to the addition of the roundabouts. A separate
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car
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park
, reserved for staff,
was built
on the east side of City
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Hospital
, whereas, a new
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car
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park
, adjacent to the right branch of the ring,
was provided
for public
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use
.

In terms of public means of transport, while in 2007 a number of bus
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stops
were present along
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Hospital
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Road
, by 2010 all buses had
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started
arriving at and leaving from the
newly
-built bus station in front of the staff
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car
park.

On the whole
, the maps indicate that the main modifications in the area concern the access to the zone where the
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hospital
is located
. Whilst the circuit of
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roads
on the western and northern side of the
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Hospital
remained unchanged after 2007, a new
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car
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park
was
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added
and the T-junction with
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Hospital
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Road
was modified
.
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IELTS academic The above diagrams provide information about the changes made in the network of roads connected with the City Hospital. The modifications occurred between 2007 and 2010.

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