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the chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who planned to leave Bulgarian from 2002 to 2008

the chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who planned to leave Bulgarian from 2002 to 2008 A3WLX
The chart below shows three groups of Bulgarian have different level of knowledge concerning to go to another country through the time from 2002 to 2008. According to the chart, one of the categories was the highest in every year, secondary group slightly fell down from 65 percent to 61 percent in 2006. More recently, it has declined moderately to 59 percent in 2008. However, the figure for people with higher education level was the lowest every year, it slowly dropped from 17 percent in 2002 to 9 percent in 2008 and gradually increased to 20 percent in 2006. In the opposite, the primary and lower educated group was moderately increasing from 18 to 19 percent in 2006. It is worth noting that this group was substantially jumping up to 32 percent after 2 years. In general, all the groups were changing steadily after 6 years. Those two higher and secondary education were decreasing slowly. Conversely, the figure of people with primary and lower education was jumping up rapidly.
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three
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of Bulgarian have
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different
level of knowledge concerning to go to another country through the time from 2002 to 2008.

According to the chart, one of the categories was the highest in every year, secondary
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group
slightly
fell down from 65
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percent
to 61
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percent
in 2006. More recently, it has declined
moderately
to 59
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percent
in 2008.
However
, the figure for
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people
with higher education level was the lowest every year, it
slowly
dropped from 17
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percent
in 2002 to 9
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percent
in 2008 and
gradually
increased to 20
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percent
in 2006.

In the opposite, the primary and lower educated
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group
was
moderately
increasing from 18 to 19
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percent
in 2006. It is worth noting that this
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group
was
substantially
jumping up to 32
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percent
after 2 years.

In general
, all the
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groups
were changing
steadily
after 6 years. Those two higher and secondary education were decreasing
slowly
.
Conversely
, the figure of
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people
with primary and lower education was jumping up
rapidly
.
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IELTS academic the chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who planned to leave Bulgarian from 2002 to 2008

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