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line graph illustrates total music sales

line graph illustrates total music sales ENEe3

The line graph illustrates total music sales either as stream, downloads or CDS purchased yearly from the year 2011 to 2018 percentagewise. overall, decrease in purchase for both CDs and downloads was observed being high at the begining with slightly increased of the latter in almost mid of the period. in contrast sales through streams started low initialy steadily increased being at the pick towards the end of the time frame. there was sharp consistent drop in compact disk puchase form slighty bellow 60% in the begining to about quater at the end. likewise, down loads droped slightly at the end by nearly 5% in comparizone to slightly above athird of sales in 2011 but with upward falctuation from the same time going up above 40% in 2014 before experiancing fall till the last year. streams started on low note in the begining of the period at about 5% with positive growth supersing CDS and downloads in 2016 and 2017 respectively. finaly it sales are closed in 2018 being the most improved at about 41%.

The line graph illustrates total music You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 either as stream, downloads or CDS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 yearly from the year 2011 to 2018 Possible spelling mistake found.percentage wise
percentagewise
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, decrease in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 for both CDs and downloads was observed
 being high at the Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
 with slightly
 increased of the latter in almost mid of the period. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?contrast,
contrast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 through streams This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 low Possible spelling mistake found.initialinitiallyinitialsinitial y
initialy
steadily
 increased being at the pick towards the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the time frame.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 was sharp consistent drop in compact disk Possible spelling mistake found.purchase
puchase
 form Possible spelling mistake found.slightlyslightflightyshiftyslightsslight y
slighty
 bellow 60% in the Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
 to about Possible spelling mistake found.quarterQuakerquaver
quater
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLikewise
likewise
, down loads Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "dropped", the past tense form of the verb 'drop'?droppeddrapeddopedropeddroopedgroped
droped
slightly
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 by nearly
 5% in Possible spelling mistake found.comparisoncomparisons
comparizone
 to slightly
 above Possible spelling mistake found.thirda third
athird
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 in 2011 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with upward Possible spelling mistake found.fluctuationactuation
falctuation
 from the same time going up above 40% in 2014 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
Possible spelling mistake found.experiencing
experiancing
 fall till the ‘last year’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last year
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStreams
streams
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 on low note in the Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
 of the period at about 5% with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 growth Possible spelling mistake found.super sing
supersing
 CDS and downloads in 2016 and 2017 respectively
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFinaly
finaly
 it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
are closed
 in 2018 being the most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 at about 41%. 