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The 3 pie charts illustrate the amount of money spent by school

The 3 pie charts illustrate the amount of money spent by school XDxNP

The 3 pie charts illustrate the amount of money spent by school on 5 categories (teachers salaries, other workers salaries, resources, furniture, and equipment) which is located in the UK and specifically in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001. Overall, it shows that in all the mentioned years money spent on paying the salaries for teachers is the highest amount, while the last place is occupied by insurance. Furthermore, it describes the significant changes with respect to expenditure on other categories. As teachers play a vital role in school even management has given the highest priority in paying their salaries. The amount that school has spent on teachers salaries accounts to 40% in the year 1981 and abruptly inclined to about 50% in 1991. Then again it gradually dropped to 45% in the year 2001. Similarly spending on resources were 15% initially in 1981 then in 1991 it has boasted to 20% and dramatically it fell to 9% in 2001. On the other hand, Although expenditure on insurance is the lowest in all the mentioned years, there is a gradual increase in from 1981 to 2001. In addition, salaries spent on other workers have constantly declined ( 28%, 22% and 15%) and it is clearly evident that money spent on developing the furniture in school drastically rose to 23% in 2001 from 5% in 1991.

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