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Test 6 WRITING WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Islip town centre now Countryside Shops Main road Shops Housing Housing ২ E Park School Islip town centre: planned development Bus Shopping Car station centre park Pedestrians only Shops Housing School New housing New housing Housing Park N E S Dual carriageway 50

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The maps

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going the future.

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to
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Islip
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town
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delevop
for

11 12
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, the and future plan is impressive
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majer
developments to
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Ocau
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Occworld
in are this
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town
going

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the

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current
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sitution
of

2 3 4 5 having
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town
is
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ardinryith
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naing
shops road
yet
tire
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alated
Housing
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by has of main bath sides is
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area tar
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which residential purpose:
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de
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trei
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queens is in Park is in east side
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will 7 future development
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plan
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uduge
the
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with be entire
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wrounded
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byering
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will be
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entre
and
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covid
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n entire city face if
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will road. Major bus station,
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thopping
housing with new Car park
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southern


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sige
will
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decreased and
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schaal
size will
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's the housing carriage will be part new
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han
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IELTS academic Test 6 WRITING WRITING TASK 1 The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Academic
  American English
13 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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