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TEH CAHRT SHOW THE PRODUCTION APPLE JUICE CONCENTRATION

TEH CAHRT SHOW THE PRODUCTION APPLE JUICE CONCENTRATION eElOJ
THE PROVIDED FLOW CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROCESS OF APPLE JUICE Concentration IS MANUFACTURED. OVERALL, THE CHART CONTAIN 11 STAGES FROM HARVESTING TO DELIVERY AND THERE THREE MAJOR PROCESS (HARVESTING, PASTEURIZATION AND PACKAGING). IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE FARMERS HARVEST AND SELECT blue-green FROM FARMS SECONDLY, THE SELECTED olive MOVES IN RECEIVING BELT WHERE WASHING SORTING OF globe IS DONE AND olive ARE SORTED NEXT, THE GRINDER GRINDS THE WASHED asteroid INTO ENORMOUS VESSELS AND TRANSFERS TO PRESSING MACHINES. IN THIS STAGE, Certifier Separates LIQUIDS FROM olive combination THEN, THE AROMA IS ADDED TO Concentrated FORM OF JUICE. THE PROCESS CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE ADDITIVE SMELL consolidation COMES UNDER Filtration WHERE consolidation OF extract IS FILTERED AND PASTEURIZED BY HEATING JUICE TO 80 DEGREES CELSIUS. AFTER THAT, THE liquor IS READY FOR FILLING AND PACKAGING UNDER BOTTLES. FINALLY, THE PACKED BOTTLE ARE TRANSPORTED IN HUGE TRUCKS FOR DELIVERY.
THE PROVIDED FLOW CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROCESS OF APPLE JUICE Concentration
IS MANUFACTURED
.

OVERALL
, THE CHART CONTAIN 11 STAGES FROM HARVESTING TO DELIVERY AND THERE THREE MAJOR PROCESS (HARVESTING, PASTEURIZATION AND PACKAGING).

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, THE FARMERS HARVEST AND SELECT blue-green FROM FARMS
SECONDLY
, THE SELECTED olive
MOVES
IN RECEIVING BELT WHERE WASHING SORTING OF globe
IS DONE
AND olive
ARE SORTED
NEXT
, THE GRINDER GRINDS THE WASHED asteroid INTO ENORMOUS VESSELS AND TRANSFERS TO PRESSING MACHINES. IN THIS STAGE, Certifier Separates LIQUIDS FROM olive combination THEN, THE AROMA IS
ADDED
TO Concentrated FORM OF JUICE.

THE PROCESS CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE ADDITIVE SMELL consolidation
COMES
UNDER Filtration WHERE consolidation OF extract
IS FILTERED
AND PASTEURIZED BY HEATING JUICE TO 80 DEGREES CELSIUS. AFTER THAT, THE liquor IS READY FOR FILLING AND PACKAGING UNDER BOTTLES.
FINALLY
, THE PACKED BOTTLE
ARE TRANSPORTED
IN HUGE TRUCKS FOR DELIVERY.
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IELTS academic TEH CAHRT SHOW THE PRODUCTION APPLE JUICE CONCENTRATION

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4 paragraphs
150 words
7.0
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