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task1 _ producing sugar from sugar cane

task1 _ producing sugar from sugar cane 2RRL6

The given diagram illustrates the stages of production of sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it is obvious that this process contains seven main steps, from growing sugar canes to drying and cooling it. First, as can be seen from the diagram, the sugar cane is planted, and it takes (12-18 maths) to grow properly. After being grown, it can be harvested by two methods either manually or mechanically. In the manual procedure, the farmer tries to gather it by their hand which is time_ consuming, while the mechanical method can be done in a short time without putting numerous energy. Besides, having been had harvested, sugar canes are crushed, which can convert it to juice and is moved to the next step to be purified, which is done by limestone filter. These sugar canes, then, are evaporated in a container via direct heat from a fire until the juice becomes syrup. Subsequently, this syrup is passed through the centrifuge, which is designed to separate sugar crystals from the syrup. Lastly, the sugar is dried and cooled to be wrapped and dispatched to consumers.

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 to drying and cooling it.

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is planted
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) to grow properly
. After being grown
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can be harvested
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 or mechanically
. In the manual procedure, the farmer tries to gather it by their hand which is time_ consuming, while the mechanical method can be done
 in a short time without putting numerous energy.

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, having been had
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sugar
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canes
are crushed
, which can convert it to juice and is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the next
 step to be purified
, which is done
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sugar
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canes
, then, are evaporated
 in a container via direct heat from a fire until the juice becomes syrup. Subsequently
, this syrup is passed
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 to separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
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, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
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is dried
 and cooled to be wrapped
 and dispatched to consumers. 