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Task1 map village chorleywood

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The illustration delineates how the development of Hollywood suburb in London took place from 1868 to 1994, over a period of 125 years. Overall, development works in this rural area proceeded much rapidly during 1970 to 1994 than that or previous decades. As can be seen from the map, improvement in Hollywood countryside was limited during the 19th century when space surrounded the Hollywood station witnessed some advancement works. The railways were erected in 1909 and it went across the station area and formed the ground for a wider expansion and constructions between 1922 and 1970, end of which the motorway was established in this village. The outskirts went through rapid improvement between 1970 and 1994 and had a wider roadway at this time. Another point worth mentioning is that development and constructions in Hollywood were guided by the transportation facilities as the junction space witnessed a faster and large-scale progress than other field. The park and the Golf course are in the middle of the suburb and train, road and motorways formed a hash (#) like road system in Hollywood.
The illustration delineates how the development of Hollywood suburb in London took place from 1868 to 1994, over a period of 125 years.

Overall
, development works in this rural area proceeded much
rapidly
during 1970 to 1994 than that or previous decades.

As can be
seen
from the map, improvement in Hollywood countryside
was limited
during the 19th century when space surrounded the Hollywood station witnessed
some
advancement works. The railways
were erected
in 1909 and it went across the station area and formed the ground for a wider expansion and constructions between 1922 and 1970,
end
of which the motorway
was established
in this village.

The outskirts went through rapid improvement between 1970 and 1994 and had a wider roadway at this time. Another point worth mentioning is that development and constructions in Hollywood
were guided
by the transportation facilities as the junction space witnessed a faster and large-scale progress than other field. The park and the Golf course are in the middle of the suburb and train, road and motorways formed a hash (#) like road system in Hollywood.
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IELTS academic Task1 map village chorleywood

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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