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The maps illustrate the grow up of Darwin town between 2009 and 2014

The maps illustrate the grow up of Darwin town between 2009 and 2014 xO71a

The maps illustrate the grow up of Darwin town between 2009 and 2014 It is clear that 2 industrial areas were developed to protect the environment. They not only planted more tree but a university school was also built in there. To attract tourism, people construted a habour. In 2009, there were 2 industrial areas which had big ground of the map. The large on located in the south and the smaller was in northen of it. In east was the sea which just contain fishing area and no more buildiing Over 5 years, Darwin town changes greatly. Because of the pollute, citizens plant more tree in 2 industrial areas, they also set up a university for there child. Furthermore, Darwin town is a good place to visit so they build a harbour to develop the tourism

The maps illustrate the The word 'grow' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "growth"?growth
grow
 up of Darwin town between 2009 and 2014

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that 2 industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
were developed
 to protect the environment. They not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 planted more tree This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a university school was also
 built in there. To attract tourism, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Possible spelling mistake found.constructedconstrued
construted
 a Possible spelling mistake found.abouthourlaborharborSeymourBarbour
habour
.

In 2009, there were 2 industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 which had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 ground of the map. The large on located in the south and the smaller was in Possible spelling mistake found.northernnorthernor thennorth en
northen
 of it. In east was the sea which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 contain fishing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and no more Possible spelling mistake found.building
buildiing


Over 5 years, Darwin town This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
greatly
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'pollute' is correct. If 'pollute' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the pollute
, citizens plant more tree in 2 industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
, they also
 set up a university for Did you mean "their"?their
there
 child. Furthermore
, Darwin town is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 place to visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they build a Possible spelling mistake. 'harbour' is British English.harbor
harbour
 to develop the tourism