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The bar chart blue shows that top 10 countries border protection and consumption of that electricity in 2014.

The bar chart blue shows that top 10 countries border protection and consumption of that electricity in 2014. kbLYR

The bah chart provides the data world ten big countries there electricity growth and requirement in 2014. In the China, was on the top positione and at the state board in production and consumption 5. 398 and 5. 322. United States, head on the second number in the the country reproduction more than need 4. 099 and 3. 866. There had similar amount in the Russia, Japan and India, there demand were less than they produced. In the Canada and France they reproduce 618. 9 and 561. 2 but the requirement was 499. 9 and 462. 9. Brazil and Korea production were more than their require electricity except Germany that was only country in the top ten countries, there consumption was more than production. Overall, it is clearly, seems that China was on the first level both aspects, production and need also. In the figure all of them requirement loss than production except Germany.

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