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(Task 1) The diagram shows the one method of manufacture ceramic pots .

(Task 1) The diagram shows the one method of manufacture ceramic pots. bxBrP
The provided diagram demonstrate the one method how to manufacture ceramic pots. overall, it is evident from the data that there are 10 steps to make ceramic pots the process starting with pick up raw material and culminating with give thousand degree celsius to finished pots. To begin with the first step, machine dig up and collect raw materials to transport to factories with the help of trucks. Secondly, factories are crushing the material and then mixing with water. Afterthat, the material maxing with water make molds that molds keep outside to drying for 4 to 6 hours. Probing ahead with the next steps, drying molds assembled into the clay pots to give proper pot shape. Then, ceramic pots keep into oven and give 1000 degree Celsius to maintain permanent shape. Furthermore, the clay pots dip into colour bin and after that the colour of firing is complete and ports are also complete for sale.
The provided diagram demonstrate the one method how to manufacture ceramic
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.
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overall
, it is evident from the data that there are 10 steps to
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make
ceramic
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pots
the process starting with pick up raw
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material
and culminating with give
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thousand
degree
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celsius
to finished
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pots
. To
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begin
with the
first
step, machine dig up and collect raw
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materials
to transport to factories with the
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help
of trucks.
Secondly
, factories are crushing the
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material
and then mixing with water.
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Afterthat
, the
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material
maxing with water
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make
molds that molds
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keep
outside to drying for 4 to 6 hours. Probing ahead with the
next
steps, drying molds assembled into the clay
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pots
to give proper
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pot
shape. Then, ceramic
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pots
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keep
into oven and give 1000 degree Celsius to maintain permanent shape.
Furthermore
, the clay
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pots
dip into
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colour
bin and after that the
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colour
of firing is complete and ports are
also
complete for sale.
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IELTS academic (Task 1) The diagram shows the one method of manufacture ceramic pots.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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