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the car onwership in the uk

the car onwership in the uk Awkrn

The line chart given compare and contrast the data on the changes of the owning of cars by the British over the 30-year period starting from 1975. Overall, it is clear that while people living in the UK did not have a car or have 1 car witnessed a downward trend, there was an upward trend in the figures for the other catalogues. In addition, the figure for 1 car experienced the most noticeable change during the research period. Looking at the graph in more detail, in 1975, the proportion of the British possessing 3 cars or more cars registered approximately 4 percent, in comparison with about 7, 30, 42 percent of the 2 cars, 1 car and 0 car respectively. From 1975 to 2005, the figure for 1 car decreased significantly at just under 40 percent before recovering slightly to 40 percent in the year 2005. Similarly, the owning of 2 cars also undergone a considerable decline by 13 percent from 30 percent to 17 percent during the period 30 years. In contrast, the number of people having 1 car rose remarkable roughly 16 percent. Likewise, the figure for 0 car saw a minimally growth and reach just a peak about 9 percent in the end of the research period.

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 by the British over the 30-year period starting from 1975.

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change
 during the research period.

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percent
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 of the 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
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car
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respectively
. From 1975 to 2005, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
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 in the year 2005.

Similarly
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also
 undergone a considerable decline by 13 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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. Likewise
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figure
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 a peak about 9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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 of the research period. 