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Production of milk and procedure of dairy products

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The diagram explains the way milk is produced and converted into cheese and cream and butter. overall, the process consists of eight stages beginning with, cow grazing to produce milk and ending up packaging. First of all, cows graze in the fields, after that, they are taken to a milking machine two times a day, where milked collect then transferred in the storage for cooling In the next stage milk is put into our ticket then delivered to dairy. In the next stage, after the delivery, milk is ready to convert into dairy items mainly, cheese cream and butter. In the subsequent step, all products are ready to pack into containers this stage is done through a milk pasteurized process, then transfer nearby shops and markets for sale.

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 the way You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is produced
 and converted into cheese and cream and butter.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, the process consists of eight You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 beginning with, cow grazing to produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 and ending up packaging.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, cows graze in the fields, after that, they are taken
 to a milking machine two times a day, where milked collect then transferred in the storage for cooling In the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is put
 into our ticket then delivered to dairy.

In the next
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stage
, after the delivery, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is ready to convert into dairy items mainly
, cheese cream and butter. In the subsequent step, all products are ready to pack into containers this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
is done
 through a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 pasteurized process, then transfer nearby shops and markets for sale. 