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Task 1. The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane.

Task 1. The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. ELKyB
The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it can be seen that the process involves 7 main stages, beginning with sugar cane being grown and culminating with cooling the resulting sugar. In the first stage, sugar cane after being taken care of from 12=18 months is ready for being harvested by automatic machine or human. Next, the freshly cut sugar canes are crushed to extract juice, which sequentially goes through the purifying device to get rid of dirt. In the next step of the process, the filtered juice is subsequently heated after being poured into the evaporator at a given temperature to condense it to syrup. The process concludes with crystals being extracted from the syrup then the refined liquid being dried and cooled down at room temperature.
The diagram illustrates the
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process
of producing
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sugar
from
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sugar
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cane
.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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process
involves 7 main stages, beginning with
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sugar
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cane
being grown
and culminating with cooling the resulting sugar.

In the
first
stage,
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sugar
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cane
after
being taken
care of
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from 12=18
months is ready for
being harvested
by automatic machine or human.
Next
, the
freshly
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cut
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sugar
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canes
are crushed
to extract juice, which
sequentially
goes through the purifying device to
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get
rid of dirt.

In the
next
step of the
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process
, the filtered juice is
subsequently
heated after
being poured
into the evaporator at a
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given
temperature to condense it to syrup. The
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process
concludes with crystals
being extracted
from the syrup then the refined liquid
being dried
and cooled down at room temperature.
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IELTS academic Task 1. The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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