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Task 1. The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane.

Task 1. The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. ELKyB

The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it can be seen that the process involves 7 main stages, beginning with sugar cane being grown and culminating with cooling the resulting sugar. In the first stage, sugar cane after being taken care of from 12=18 months is ready for being harvested by automatic machine or human. Next, the freshly cut sugar canes are crushed to extract juice, which sequentially goes through the purifying device to get rid of dirt. In the next step of the process, the filtered juice is subsequently heated after being poured into the evaporator at a given temperature to condense it to syrup. The process concludes with crystals being extracted from the syrup then the refined liquid being dried and cooled down at room temperature.

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. Overall
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sugar
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being grown
 and culminating with cooling the resulting sugar.

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sugar
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cane
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from 12=18
 months is ready for being harvested
 by automatic machine or human. Next
, the freshly
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cut
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sugar
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canes
are crushed
 to extract juice, which sequentially
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get
 rid of dirt.

In the next
 step of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, the filtered juice is subsequently
 heated after being poured
 into the evaporator at a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 temperature to condense it to syrup. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 concludes with crystals being extracted
 from the syrup then the refined liquid being dried
 and cooled down at room temperature. 