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The graph illustrates the amount of water usage were categorized in Agricultural, Industrial and household in the globe over 100 years. Overall, it is clearly that, the most proportion of water consumption dedicated to the farming compared to Industry and domestic use from 1900 to 2000. The figure showed that, in begin the trends in both companies and houses were the lowest point between 1900 and 2000 almost close to zero. while, irrigation in farms was by far more than other parts at about 500 km3 then it remained stable Over the following 50 years, there were an increase in all of sectors. It experienced a dramatic rose when it reached to 3000 km3 in 2000 in natural and environmental consumptions. However, the water usage become approximately 5000Km3 in industry which was doubled of wasting water in houses over the period mentioned. In general, the data shown it saw a rapid consumption of water in diverse fields from 1950 until 2000.
The graph illustrates the amount of
water
usage
were categorized
in Agricultural, Industrial and household in the globe over 100 years.
Overall
, it is
clearly
that, the most proportion of
water
consumption dedicated to the farming compared to Industry and domestic
use
from 1900 to 2000.

The figure
showed
that, in
begin
the trends in both
companies
and
houses
were the lowest point between 1900 and 2000 almost close to zero.
while
, irrigation in farms was by far more than other parts at about 500 km3 then it remained stable

Over the following 50 years, there were an increase in
all of sectors
. It experienced a dramatic rose when it reached to 3000 km3 in 2000 in natural and environmental
consumptions
.
However
, the
water
usage become approximately 5000Km3 in industry which
was doubled
of wasting
water
in
houses
over the period mentioned.

In general
, the data shown it
saw
a rapid consumption of
water
in diverse fields from 1950 until 2000.
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