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Task 1 the amount of londoners who commute to work with different transports

Task 1 the amount of londoners who commute to work with different transports x8rBQ

The above charts show how Londoners have historically commuted to work and the average London traffic speeds between the years 1970 and 2010. These data sources clearly communicate that Londoners are gradually finding alternative ways to com mute to work as traffic congestion worsens. The first chart illustrates that 41% of Londoners commuted to work by car in 1970. This value climbs to 47% by 1990 but then falls gradually to 34% in 2010. Subway usage is negatively correlated. The 32% of total London commuters that travelled by subway in 1970 dips to 26% by 1990 only to grow to 36% by 2010. Bus usage falls from a high of 23% in 1970 to 19% in 2010. Travelling to work by bicycle or on foot saw modest grow from 2% in 1970 to 8% and 5% in 2010 respectively. The second chart indicates that traffic speeds in London have steadily slowed over the period in question. In 1970, average London traffic speeds were 24 miles per hour. This figure slows to 19 miles per hour in 1990 and 15 miles per hour in 2010.

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show
 how Londoners have historically
 commuted to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and the average London You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 speeds between the years 1970 and 2010. These data sources clearly
 communicate that Londoners are gradually
 finding alternative ways to com mute to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 congestion worsens.

The first
 chart illustrates that 41% of Londoners commuted to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 by car in 1970. This value climbs to 47% by 1990 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then falls gradually
 to 34% in 2010. Subway usage is negatively
 correlated. The 32% of total London commuters that travelled by subway in 1970 dips to 26% by 1990 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to grow to 36% by 2010. Bus usage falls from a high of 23% in 1970 to 19% in 2010. Travelling to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 by bicycle or on foot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 modest grow from 2% in 1970 to 8% and 5% in 2010 respectively
.

The second chart indicates that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 speeds in London have steadily
 slowed over the period in question. In 1970, average London You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 speeds were Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.24 miles per hour (ca. 39 km/h)24 miles per hour (38.62 km/h)24 miles per hour (ca. 39 kilometers per hour)24 miles per hour (38.62 kilometers per hour)
24 miles per hour
. This figure slows to Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.19 miles per hour (ca. 31 km/h)19 miles per hour (30.58 km/h)19 miles per hour (ca. 31 kilometers per hour)19 miles per hour (30.58 kilometers per hour)
19 miles per hour
 in 1990 and Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.15 miles per hour (ca. 24 km/h)15 miles per hour (24.14 km/h)15 miles per hour (ca. 24 kilometers per hour)15 miles per hour (24.14 kilometers per hour)
15 miles per hour
 in 2010. 