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The bar chart compares the propotion of the world’s population in 4 different countries such as India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and prediction for 2050.

The bar chart compares the propotion of the world’s population in 4 different countries such as India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and prediction for 2050. AJYKn
The bar chart compares the proportion of the world’s population in 4 different countries such as India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and prediction for 2050. Overall, the percentage of all nations except India noticed slight over a 52-year period, starting from 1950 and expected to continue to 2050. Moreover, The proportion of India’s population is predicted to crossover China as the most populous country. In 1950, China was the most populous country in the world with approximately 25% and higher than India with 15%. Meanwhile, the proportion of USA’s population and Japan’s population were significantly lower with roughly 7 % and 3%. In the next 52 years, China’s population dipped slightly with 20%, similar to USA and Japan with 5% and nearly 3%, while India kept on rise minimally with over 16%. Subsequently, The population of India is expected to grow slightly and become the world’s largest population with nearly 20%, 4 percentage points higher than China, in 2050. 2 other countries, the percentage of Japan’s population is predicted to down minimally with under 2%, while that proportion of USA will remain stable in 2050.
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in 1950, 2002 and prediction for 2050.

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Japan’s
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