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The line chart illustrates the weekly consumption of 3 different kinds of fast food in the UK during 1970 to 1990

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The line chart illustrates the weekly consumption of 3 different kinds of fast food in the UK during 1970 to 1990. Overall, the quantities of pizza consumed notice rise over the period give, while the amount of Hamburger and Fish & chips used rose dramatically during the research period. In 1970, the quantities of pizza were the highest, at over 300grams, while the amount of hamburger and fish & chips were just around 30 and 80 grams respectively. The period between 1975 and 1980 witnessed a marked drop of pizza, while both the fish & chips and hamburger increased significantly. In 1985, the amount of fish & chips consumption grew to 300grams and the later time was the highest point, reaching to 500 grams in 1990. Similarly, the quantities of hamburger reached to about 290 grams at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the amount of Pizza eaten dipped noticeably at 200 grams and later went up approximately to 210 grams Overall, the quantities of pizza consumed notice rise over the period give, while the amount of Hamburger and Fish & chips used rose dramatically during the research period. In 1970, the quantities of pizza were the highest, at over 300grams, while the amount of hamburger and fish & chips were just around 30 and 80 grams respectively. The period between 1975 and 1980 witnessed a marked drop of pizza, while both the fish & chips and hamburger increased significantly. In 1985, the amount of fish & chips consumption grew to 300grams and the later time was the highest point, reaching to 500 grams in 1990. Similarly, the quantities of hamburger reached to about 290 grams at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the amount of Pizza eaten dipped noticeably at 200 grams and later went up approximately to 210 grams.
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates the weekly consumption of 3 different kinds of fast food in the UK during 1970 to 1990

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