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Task 1 – line graph – the income of four cafes in New York

Task 1 – line graph – the income of four cafes in New York VYny6

The line graph compares the income of four cafes in New York and how these rates changed over the year before. Overall, the income of the Internet Express, Wi-fi Café, Café Cool fluctuated continuously and increased strongly in the last month of the year. Although the income of The Tea Room rapid decreased in the last months, but almost time in year the income of its was higher than those stores. From January to August, the income of both Internet Express and Café Cool increased and decreased unstably, meanwhile the income of Wi-fi Café speeded up from May to July before fell down in August. In the last months, the funds of three of them increased significantly, they achieved over 120. 000 dollars in December, while the Wi-fi Café had about 190. 000 dollars – the highest income in four stores. Over the same period, the income of The Tea Room was also unstably but it earned about 130. 000 dollars in August, higher than those stores. From October to the December, it decreased significantly and it only remained about 50. 000 dollars in December – the lowest income in four Café.

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income
 of four 'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"cafés
cafes
 in New York and how these rates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over the year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 of the Internet Express, Possible spelling mistake found.Wi-FiWiFiWIFIHi-fi
Wi-fi
 Café, Café Cool fluctuated continuously
 and increased strongly
 in the last month of the year. Although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 of The Tea Room rapid decreased in the last months, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 almost time in year the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 of its was higher than those stores.

From January to August, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 of both Internet Express and Café Cool increased and decreased unstably
, meanwhile the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 of Possible spelling mistake found.Wi-FiWiFiWIFIHi-fi
Wi-fi
 Café Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "sped", the past tense form of the verb 'speed'?spedseededspeeder
speeded
 up from May to July This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 fell down in August. In the last months, the funds of three of them increased significantly
, they achieved over 120. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in December, while the Possible spelling mistake found.Wi-FiWiFiWIFIHi-fi
Wi-fi
 Café had about 190. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
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–
 the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 in four stores.

Over the same period, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 of The Tea Room was also
unstably
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it earned about 130. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in August, higher than those stores. From October to the December, it decreased significantly
 and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 remained about 50. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in December Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 in four Possible agreement error. The noun 'Café' seems to be countable, so consider using: "cafés".Cafés
Café
. 